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Wednesday 5 December 2018

Freestyle Writing-Fe'ao

WALT:Freestyle write based on an image.

Today our Teacher (Miss Komor) asked us to write a story
about a picture. This is what I wrote.
Tell me what you think in the comment section down below.
The Wind Rushed through her hair as she descended the mountain at great speed for most children this would be exhilarating, even terrifying experience, but for Lucy it was just an ordinary journey to School. Lucy’s house is like a massive tree house and the tree is humongous and also really strong.

Her school looks like an ordinary school but her school is an FBI and her teacher is a human yellow looking squid. And there is no similarities to my school.

Lucy is having the time of her life! It looks like that she is going to fall over and her days and her life is over. But she doesn't notice about it.

Because it looks like that she is worried about something.She has two guns two knives and a sword and a statute of herself. Because it would be hard to like get down and walk to school.

And you are wondering how she gets into her house. Well she has two knives and she uses it to climb up the tree house.
When she gets to her house.
Why are you late shouted Lucy Dad
Lucy Say nothing to her dad.
Then suddenly Lucy starts running into her room.
Why are you running? Why are you are!? Her Dad says questioning her daughter.

Then Lucy walks over to her Mirror looks at herself and says why is my life miserable. Then she punches her window and then goes to her mum and her dad then she kills both of them with her knife then she went down to the School (Actually a FBI place)
And know her next mark is Alo Hingano.
To be Continued

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